留学申请的材料,是大家接受学校审核的载体,必须要确认的是材料的完整性和真实性。接下来留学群来介绍德国留学申请书写作内容要求一览表。
写作内容
1、你大学读这 个专业为什么选择目前申请专业?
2、你父母做什么工作对你申请专业有什么影响?
3、你对目前申请专业领域的问题如何看待,比如申请金融,现在国家允许银行倒闭的问题你如何看待?
4、你有什么和招生办公室老师们分享的事情吗?
5、你有什么团队协助的案例吗?
6、你是怎么样计划到这个国家或者地区度过1-2年的研究生生活?
7、你毕业后的2-3年计划到什么样的单位做什么样的工作呢?
8、你为什么选择这个国家而不是其它国家呢?
9、你为什么选择这个国家的这个大学的这个专业而不是其它专业呢?
写作重点
一、突出重点,主线明确
清楚有力地表达您的求学动机,和学习学术能力。在国内有一种错误的观点,要“煽情”才能有效果。
有的留学申请人就通过描述不相干活动展示“独特”的性格,或是学术上感觉没有什么可写的,就写自己考试时克服了重重困难,如何考取了好成绩!这是根本不着边际的写法,会让录取者发掘不到你的特点。
要知道,你是要在很短的时间内,清楚地用几百字告诉招生教授你是入学(奖学金)非常合格的人选,盲目“煽情”完全不需要。
二、结构简单,衔接紧密
留学文书其实是你个人的广告!要重点突出,形象鲜明。仔细想想,留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而富有创意的?许多申请人往往想把自己的全部优点都写出来告诉教授,觉得这样才能全面的展现自己。
但是:“Simple is the best ”,试想一下,招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作,还要抽出时间阅读数量可观的留学申请资料,只有那种简单有力的文章才能HIT THE TARGET,让人印象深刻!我们的理念是简明而富有创意的!
三、符合西方思维习惯
文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。我们在以往的经历中发现,有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点,反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见;而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的,认为这些能表现出申请人布满个性。
所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材,把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来,在适当地篇幅里展示出来。
申请书范文
I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXi autonomous region, in 2006. I am still studying in high school now, because I was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.
First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which I think is more reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parents my plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.
As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education, I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.
My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.
I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished all high school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my life value.
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