个人陈述:招生官最讨厌的10大陈词滥调,跟着留学群一起来了解下吧,欢迎阅读。
Ucas数据显示,“从小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been...)是去年申请者最常用的开头。70万学生中有超过1,779名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)结尾。
小编梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子,各位准备写申请的童鞋可要留心哟!
1. “自打记事起,我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)
2. “我申请这个课程是因为……”(I am applying for this course because...)
3. “我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in...)
4. “在我一生当中,我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)
5. “回顾我的教育经历,我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)
6. “护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)
7. “在学术上,我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)
8. “我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)
9. “我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about...)
10. “教育是充满力量的武器,你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)
Ucas首席执行官Mary Curnock Cook表示,个人陈述一定要个人化。“学会介绍自己在求职面试中是一项很重要的技能,用那些陈词滥调无法让你的才能凸显。”