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　　2012年山西高考英语优秀作文选

　　摘要 ：I have read your advertisement and I’m very interested in your A Day Tour. So I want to know more about the exact details.

　　假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。

　　注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame,

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　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　范 文

　　1

　　My name is Li Hua. I’m having a language training at Oxford University. I plan to have a trip around London on Sunday. luckily, I noticed that there is an advertisement on a tour around London on the net. However, I still have some questions.

　　First, I’d like to know what’s the price for students. And does it include the entrance fee and the lunch? If we visit the Buckingham, can we have shopping time? What’s more, will you please tell me the time to return because I have some other things to deal with later. I’ll be very thankful for your answer.

　　2

　　I am attending a short-term language training program right now in Oxford, planning for a visit to London on Sunday. When I was surfing the internet and happened to see your advertisement, it caught my notice at once. But there’re some details not clearly showed in the ad that I want to make sure.

　　Is the price charged in the ad the same for students? Does it include the cost for lunch, and is there any extra entrance fees needed? During the whole trip, will there be any time left for shopping? And when can we actually get back?

　　I need all the above information to decide whether to join your tour. Please send back your reply.

　　Thanks a lot.

　　3

　　I’m a student and I’m receiving English-training in Oxford University. I’ve planned to make a trip to London on Sunday. Several days ago, I happened to find an advertisement for a truly exciting day tour on the Internet. However, there are still some information unclear. So I’m writing to you to make them clear.

　　First, I don’t know whether shopping time during the tour is arranged. As you know, I’d like to do some shopping in London. Secondly, it is about the price. I wonder whether the price provided includes the entrance fees and the expense for lunch. What’s more, what about the price for students? Lastly, I want to know the time to return besides the start-time.

　　That’s all,. Your early reply will be appreciated.

　　4

　　I have just learnt about the exciting tour around London advertised on the Internet. But I have some questions about the trip. Above all, I am eager to know whether shopping time is included in the tour, for I have planned to buy some presents for friends. What’s more, I’m wondering whether the price you provide includes entrance fees and the lunch fee and whether I can pay less money with a student card. Still more, please tell me when it is that we will return, for I have to make some preparations for the Monday’s Language classes, in Oxford.

　　Thank you very much answering all my questions. I’m looking forward to your reply and hoping to enjoy an excellent tour on Sunday.

　　5

　　I ‘am attending a short training of language now in Oxford. I want to pay a visit to London this Sunday, so I’m very interested in the advertisement “A Truly Exciting Day Tour” which you advertised on the Internet. But I have some questions. I know we’ll travel Big Ben. London Eye and Buckingham Palace, but I don’t know anything about our shopping time. There is only a “￡ 45” about the price. However, I want to know whether it includes the entrance fees and the lunch fee. I also don’t know if it is a price for students or adults. Besides, I want to know what’s the time to return. Thank you.

　　I have read your advertisement and I’m very interested in your A Day Tour. So I want to know more about the exact details.

　　The advertisement shows the places to visit while it hasn’t told us what the shopping time is. Also, the price is not very clear. Could you please tell me what the price for students is and if the entrance fees and the lunch fees are included? What’s more, I can’t get the clear time to return from the advertisement.

　　I hope that you can give me a reply for more detailed information.

　　Than you very much

　　7

　　I’m very interesting in your advertisement which caught my eyes when I was surfing the net. Now I’m writing to ask about some details about it.

　　Places to visit sound attractive, but I’d like to know if we have shopping time and when it is. Since I am not a student of Oxford but attending a short language training here, I need to know whether 45 pounds is the price for students. I still want both included. 6:30 in the morning is a good time for starting the tour, but when will we return?

　　I really want to take your Day Tour Service on Sunday, so I look forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　8 (24分)

　　my name is Li Hua, and I am taking part in a language training in Oxford. I have planned to travel in London on Sunday and I have found an advertisement for my traveling, but there are some problems which I must ask you for a clear explaination.

　　This advertisement says that I can travel in a place called Big Ben, London Eye, Buckingham Palace by bus when is the shopping time? It says that I need to spend $ 45. is it the complete price, containing entrance fees, lunch? And is this the price for students? When is the time for shopping? It says I can start at 6:30 am. But when I can return.

　　I’m looking forward to you reply . Thank you.

　　(注， 本卷原来打了16分。 后改为20 分)

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