高分范文

　　今天和留学群来看看托福写作高分范文解析：城市是否应该保护古老建筑。下面就和留学群的小编一起来看看吧！

　　Should a city try to preserve its old， historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

　　『分析』

　　保留历史建筑的必要性：文化意义；教育意义；商业意义（开发旅游业）

　　城市土地需求的现实性：开发住房；商业场所

　　至于要不要保留，往往是看哪一个价值更大，并且要具体情况具体分析。The answer depends on the concrete analysis of concrete conditions。

　　『范文』

　　Tall glass towers， whose shiny facades are as cool as their air-conditioned insides， are becoming part of cityscapes from South America to North East Asia. In the process， old buildings are making room for the seemingly unstoppable advancement of modernity. Thus the face of the global city is changing， and city planners are facing the difficult choice of either preserving historic building or replacing them with modern ones. As there are strong arguments for either option， the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand.

　　It is important to preserve historic buildings and parts of cities because they are part of the cultural heritage that gives identity to a community. Old homes and living quarters are a part of history， and， once destroyed， leveled， and buried under thousands of tons of concrete and steel， they will be lost forever. The constructions erected in their places in too many cases lack any sort of connecti...

　　托福写作社会类话题应该是考生们经常遇到的，不知道同学们对于这一话题把握的怎么样？今天就和留学群一起来看看托福写作社会类话题高分范文。

　　Poverty does not explain the lure of jihad for Western fighters. Many of them are quite middle-class. Nor does a failure to integrate into the societies around them. Nor does religious piety. More plausible explanations are the desire to escape the ennui of home and to find an identity.

　　估计读完这个之后很多人都疯了，你说你不为钱，不仇视社会，也不为宗教信仰，就是因为在家呆腻歪了想寻求刺激就去投身此等高危职业实在是让人很费解，真的是蛋疼不是病，疼起来是真要命啊！

　　但是上面的结论并不适用于所有的恐怖分子，我们一起来看看澳大利亚刚刚被干掉的哥们：

　　Man Haron Monis， an Iranian refugee described by those who knew him as a loner， was killed early on Tuesday after heavily armed police stormed the Lindt Chocolate Cafe to end a 16-hour hostage drama that made global headlines.

　　这哥们跟那些欧洲的兄弟还是有很大的不同的，很有可能是出身比较贫寒，而且最关键的是他太寂寞了，压根儿不愿意跟任何人产生联系，而且这哥们的记录实在是不太好：

　　Last year， Monis was charged as an accessory to the stabbing murder of his ex-wife， who was set alight in a Sydney apartment block.

　　M这个兄弟去年帮着别人把自己的前妻灭了，你说毕竟一日夫妻百日恩，人都没了，还为啥非得要放火呢？实在是令人发指啊！读到这里还没有完。。。

　　He was charged this year with more than 40 counts of sexual or indecent assault against women in Sydney， according to court documents.

　　看来真的是平时太寂寞了，也没啥女人，不能总一个人解决啊，偶尔也会控制不住啊，哎。。。读到这里还没完：

　　He was also found guilty in 2012 of sending threatening letters to the families of eight Australian soldiers killed in Afghanistan and sentenced to two years in prison， although he served only a portion ...

　　想提高托福写作，先看看别人的高分作文是怎么写的，这是一个有效的提升技巧。那么今天就由留学群为大家介绍一下托福写作商业类话题高分范文解析。

　　首先公司的目标是什么呢？当然是money了。所以少不了要用上挣钱的各种说法。嗯，只会make money？别着急，咱们看看新闻报道里都会怎么说。

　　Panhanding used to be so personal， but now， there is cyber-begging： a girl seeks for money to have surgery to be skinny. She only gets 18 bucks. But others have raked in thousands.

　　这是一则讲述网络乞讨的新闻。一个女孩在网上筹资做瘦身手术，但是只获得了很少的18美金，而其他人已经进账数千元（默默同情一下这个妹纸）。这里的rake in是指大赚一笔的意思。rake的原意是耙子（可自行想象猪八戒的钉耙）。rake in的意思就很好理解了：用耙子把钱都扫进来。是不是很形象？

　　那既然说到钱了，肯定得说公司从哪儿赚钱对吧？精明的公司肯定有一套自己的生意经和摇钱树。嗯，那摇钱树怎么说？肯定不是shake money tree啊！！咱们英文里自然有对应的说法呢。有一则新闻在报道名人用自己的婚礼赚钱时就提到了这一表达：

　　Then， there is Starr Jones. She wasn’t even coy about cashing in， selling sponsorships for her big day to Continental Airlines， sationery studios， bridal shops， dry cleaners... Wreched excess costs explain why celebrities try to turn their vows into cash cows.

　　主持人Starr Jones在结婚时也没忘赚钱，将大喜之日的赞助权卖给了大陆航空、文具公司、婚纱店、干洗店…… （这位姐也是蛮拼的~人生赢家啊）在这段新闻中咱们看到摇钱树的表达是cash cows，比喻财源滚滚如同挤牛奶一般。顺带还有一个cash in也是挣钱的意思。总而言之，这位大姐又是cash in又是cash cows，肯定是个土豪。那土豪怎么形容？有一个说法是deep-pocketed，是形容词表示多金和富有的意思。咱们记的时候就可以记土豪都需要深深的口袋来装多多的钱~~想想也是醉了啊~~鉴于篇幅有限，屌丝君就不把原文放上来了，感兴趣的小伙伴可以自己去查。

　　学了这么多“赚钱”，可别再说自己只会make money 了啊！！

　　而正常情况下，不是说公司想赚钱就能赚钱的（又不是中石油！！）。身在市场自然是要面对激烈的竞争。有多激烈呢？就比如说像下面这条一句话新闻：Lightweight computers are going head-to-head with pocket PC. 可以这么想象，竞争双方都头对头了，那肯定说明竞争是异常激烈的。所以go head-to-head是一个很形象的表达。

　　但是就算是竞争也不可能会一帆风顺，公司总会遇到各种问题，...

　　对于很多准备雅思考试的同学们来说，不知道准备得怎么样？今天就和留学群的小编一起来了解一下雅思口语话题Part2高分范文欣赏：犯过的错误。

　　Describe a mistake you once made.

　　You should say：

　　what it was

　　how you made this mistake

　　when it was

　　and explain how it affected you.

　　1.适用考生：全适用

　　2.主题：爱上不该爱的人

　　3.故事线：我一生中最大的错误是爱上了一个对生活、爱情和关系完全不同的错误女孩。当我为这个女孩努力奋斗的时候，我还不到17岁。

　　雅思口语高分范文示例：

　　The biggest mistake in my life was falling in love with the wrong girl who had a completely different view of life， love and relationship. I was hardly 17 years old when I fall hard for this girl.

　　Initially， we were classmates and then became friends. In a year I started to feel something about her that was quite extraordinary and hard to explain. I guess people call this ＇love＇. My whole world started to shift and I was surrounded by a mirage for this whole time. Not a single moment had passed when I didn＇t think about her. She was the centre and power source of my universe. When I proposed her， she expressed her boundless joys and acted as if I should have proposed her earlier. So far， this is a sweet and innocent love story of a teenager and I was happy to have her in my life.

　　However， it took me only a few months to realise that she was not serious about our relationship. When she was my whole world， I was her just another temporary boyfriend. The relationship ended in ten months and I was so broken-hearted that I could not concentra...

　　口语一向是中国学生的短板，不知道准备考雅思的同学们准备得怎么样呢？今天就和留学群的小编一起来了解一下雅思口语高分范文：家乡。

　　考官如是说：Remember that part 1 answers need to be short， direct and simple.

　　请记住part1答案应该短促，直接，简单

　　1. Where are you from？

　　你来自哪？

　　雅思口语考官范文：I＇m from Manchester， which is a city in the north west of England.

　　2. Do you like your home town？ （Why？）

　　喜欢你的家乡么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， I like living in Manchester because it＇s where most of my friends live， and because there are plenty of things to do there. The only thing I don＇t like is the weather.

　　3. Would you prefer to live somewhere else？ （Why？）

　　你更愿意生活在别处么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：For the moment I＇m happy living here， but at some point I＇d like to live in a country with a warmer climate， and I＇d like to live near a beach！

　　4. Do you think your home town is a good place for young people？ （Why？）

　　你的家乡是一个好地方么，对于年轻人来说？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， Manchester has lots of things for young people， such as sports facilities， music and cinemas.

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　　雅思口语高分句型有哪些

　　雅思口语对于很多同学来说是非常难的，不知道同学们准备得怎么样呢？今天就和留学群的小编一起来了解一下雅思口语Part1话题高分范文：家乡。

　　考官如是说：Remember that part 1 answers need to be short， direct and simple.

　　请记住part1答案应该短促，直接，简单

　　1. Where are you from？

　　你来自哪？

　　雅思口语考官范文：I＇m from Manchester， which is a city in the north west of England.

　　2. Do you like your home town？ （Why？）

　　喜欢你的家乡么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， I like living in Manchester because it＇s where most of my friends live， and because there are plenty of things to do there. The only thing I don＇t like is the weather.

　　3. Would you prefer to live somewhere else？ （Why？）

　　你更愿意生活在别处么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：For the moment I＇m happy living here， but at some point I＇d like to live in a country with a warmer climate， and I＇d like to live near a beach！

　　4. Do you think your home town is a good place for young people？ （Why？）

　　你的家乡是一个好地方么，对于年轻人来说？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， Manchester has lots of things for young people， such as sports facilities， music and cinemas.

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　　雅思口语Part1话题范文：工作

　　雅思口语对于很多同学来说是非常难的，不知道同学们准备得怎么样呢？今天就和留学群的小编一起来了解一下雅思口语Part1话题高分范文：住房。

　　考官如是说：Remember that part 1 answers need to be short， direct and simple.

　　请记住part1答案应该短促，直接，简单

　　1. Do you live in a house or an apartment？

　　你住单家独院还是公寓房？

　　雅思口语考官范文：I live in a semi-detached house with three bedrooms in a suburb of Manchester. I＇ve lived there for just over a year.

　　2. Which is your favourite room in your home？ Why？

　　那个房间是你最喜欢的？

　　雅思口语考官范文：I don＇t really have a favourite room. But if I had to choose， I＇d say the living room because that＇s where I go to sit and relax.

　　3. Would you change anything about your home？ Why / why not？

　　你会对你的家里做任何的更改么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， I＇ve been meaning to redecorate it since I moved in last year. It needs a new kitchen， so that＇s what I＇d change first.

　　4. Would you like to move to a different home in the future？

　　未来你想搬家么？

　　雅思口语考官范文：Yes， I＇d definitely move again at some point if I could afford to. I＇d like to live in the countryside， or maybe in a different city or country.

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　　雅思口语Part1话题范文：衣服

　　托福写作分为综合写作和独立写作，今天就和留学群的小编一起来看看托福独立写作高分范文欣赏。

　　Some people think that older children should be required to take care of the younger children. Others think that this should be done by parents or other adults. Which do you prefer？

　　第一段

　　In most cases， some people think that it is parents’ responsibility to take care of the whole family （1） out of various reasons and factors in situations， while others do not think so， which sound reasonable but ironical based on the fickle situations in society and history. As for me， despite the adventure of being entitled as “absolutist”， I will consistently support that older children should share the burden and be required to take care of their younger siblings （2）.

　　填充内容：

　　（1） 转述题目，或反对的观点

　　这道题是个选择类的题目，问及：究竟是完全由父母来担起照顾家庭的责任，还是应该要求年长一点的孩子来照顾弟弟妹妹。这边填充的部分就只需要选择一个与自己立场相反的观点来写即可。譬如说，我的立场是：长兄长姐应该照顾弟弟妹妹，那么空格（1）只需要填充对立的观点：父母来承担全部责任。

　　（2） 自己的立场态度

　　第二段

　　Maybe a lot of people stress the suspect of the authenticity of my point of view， but what I want to demonstrate is， this idea has been certified by our predecessor hundreds of years ago. Abraham Lincoln， for instance， is known as a great man respected by all of the American people， not merely because of his remarkable feat of leading the Union in Civil War and of emancipating the slaves in the South but because of the records and the anecdotes popular in politician...