雅思作文开头怎么写

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　　“见官死”开头之一：中式英文 人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　“见官死”开头之二：废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a ...

雅思作文开头怎么写

　　要素一：现象句

　　雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。

　　E.g.1

　　Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

　　It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

　　套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of

　　E.g.2

　　Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

　　What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

　　In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

　　主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school

　　同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

　　E.g.3

　　In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

　　It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

　　主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school...