托福独立写作对于同学们的英语书面表达能力的考验是非常严格的,那么同学们的书面表达能力怎么样呢?接下来就和留学群来看看托福独立写作模板分享:同学们可以一边写作业一边听音乐吗?
题目:Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.
立场:不同意
理由:做作业的时候干别的很难集中精力,必定会影响效率
【段落示例】
[1] Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.
[1] 主题句:It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.
[2] 正面说理:This is because….
[3] 反面说理:Conversely….
[4] 引出例子:A good case in point is X’s experience.
[5-6] 阐述例子: Content of the example
【模板总结】
It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 对于 X 的重要性或者好处。Conversely, 如果不做 A 对于 X 的坏处。A good case in point is Eg1’s experience. 2-3 句阐述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrate...