托福写作高分

　　在托福备考中，写作作为输出的一个单项，一直是大家觉得困难的一项。这其中的难点在难于找理由，难于举例子，难于组织语言，和留学群小编一起来看看托福写作高分替换词。

　　通用万能理由

　　效率（efficient）

　　环保（environmental）

　　节约（economical）

　　愿望（desire）

　　持久性（durability）

　　方便（convenience）

　　被认可感（acknowledgement）

　　成就感（achievement）

　　这些万能理由你知道吗？

　　接下来再来一招

　　写作常用高分替换词

　　alter=change or modify（改变）

　　bid=attempt（努力）

　　aid=assist（帮助，援助）

　　boost=increase（增加，提高）

　　dip=decIine /decrease/diminish（下降）

　　foil=prevent from（阻止，防止）

　　end=terminate（结束，中止）

　　curb=control /restrict（控制）

　　spur=encourage（激励，鞭策）

　　ask=inquire（询问）

　　assail=denounce（谴责）

　　blast=explode（爆炸）

　　laud=praise（赞扬）

　　weigh=consider（考虑）

　　ease=lessen（减轻，缓和）

　　ban=prohibit / forbid（禁止）

　　balk=impede（阻碍）

　　begin=commence（开始）

　　bolt=desert /abandon（放弃）

　　bare=expose / reveal（暴露，揭露）

　　check=examine（检查）

　　bilk=cheat（欺骗）

　　grill = investigate（调查）

　　flay=criticize（批评）

　　head=direct（率领）

　　swap=exchange（交流，交换）

　　sway=influence（影响）

　　map=work out（制订）

　　soar=sky rocket（急剧上升）

　　trim=reduce（削减）

　　以上就是万能理由和高分词汇了，写作还不是很有把握的同学们赶紧学起来吧！

　　推荐阅读：

　　今天和留学群来看看托福写作高分范文解析：城市是否应该保护古老建筑。下面就和留学群的小编一起来看看吧！

　　Should a city try to preserve its old， historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings？ Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

　　『分析』

　　保留历史建筑的必要性：文化意义；教育意义；商业意义（开发旅游业）

　　城市土地需求的现实性：开发住房；商业场所

　　至于要不要保留，往往是看哪一个价值更大，并且要具体情况具体分析。The answer depends on the concrete analysis of concrete conditions。

　　『范文』

　　Tall glass towers， whose shiny facades are as cool as their air-conditioned insides， are becoming part of cityscapes from South America to North East Asia. In the process， old buildings are making room for the seemingly unstoppable advancement of modernity. Thus the face of the global city is changing， and city planners are facing the difficult choice of either preserving historic building or replacing them with modern ones. As there are strong arguments for either option， the final decision will depend on a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand.

　　It is important to preserve historic buildings and parts of cities because they are part of the cultural heritage that gives identity to a community. Old homes and living quarters are a part of history， and， once destroyed， leveled， and buried under thousands of tons of concrete and steel， they will be lost forever. The constructions erected in their places in too many cases lack any sort of connecti...

　　托福写作对于很多同学来说，都是非常难的，而学习好的范文是提升作文的捷径，那么今天就和留学群的小编一起来了解下托福写作高分句型解析。

　　inal：Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and helpyou to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be kind。

　　Revised：Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience andhelp you to understand other people’s feelings andlearn to be considerate。

　　亮点评析

　　add，kind表达的含义都比较宽泛。

　　add可以指数量上的增加，也可以指程度的加强，对于“丰富经验、增加知识”这个意思，用enrich会使表达更准确。

　　kind从字面意义上讲是“好的、善良的”，用kind来形容人无法具体地表现出一个人的性格特征到底怎样，原句中是想表达“考虑周到、体贴入微”的特点，要准确表达这个含义应选择considerate。

　　2. Original：Science and technology have greatly influenced our lives and our society ischanging very rapidly。

　　Revised：Science and technology have come to pervade every aspect of our lives and， as aresult， society is changing at a speed which is quite unprecedented。

　　亮点评析

　　greatly，rapidly属于常用词，表示程度高、速度快，这样的词在表达效果上不够具体，缺乏说服力，在修改后的句子中用了pervade every aspect of our lives就具体生动地表现出科技的影响力到底有多大，其影响力已渗透到我们生活的方方面面，at a speed which is quite unprecedented意为“以一种前所未有的速度”，形象地道出了变化速度之快。

　　inal：Young people tend to think that real life is as nice and interestingas it is in the novels and movies， while more experienced adults think thiskind of naive daydream will only be destroyed by later experiences and everyone should learn to get used to common everyday life。

　　Revised：Young people tend t...

　　对于托福考试来说，熟知并且能熟练运用各种句型，对于托福写作加分是非常有帮助的。那么今天就和留学群一起来看看托福写作高分句型有哪些?

　　1、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。

　　例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

　　自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

　　2、It pays to + V ~ (...是值得的。)

　　例句：It pays to help others.

　　帮助别人是值得的。

　　3、be based on (以...为基础)

　　例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.

　　社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

　　4、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

　　例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

　　我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

　　5、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)

　　例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.

　　我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

　　6、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)

　　例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.

　　做运动与健康息息相关。

　　7、Get into the habit of + Ving

　　= make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)

　　We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.

　　我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

　　8、Due to/Owing to/

　　Thanks to + N/Ving, ~ (因为...)

　　例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.

　　因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。

　　9、What a + Adj + N + S + V!

　　= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)

　　例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!

　　How important a thing it is to keep our promise!

　　对于很多想出国留学的同学来说，那么可能需要考托福，那么今天就和留学群的小编一起来看看真诚才是获得托福高分的唯一途径。

　　在托福写作考试中，很多考生在备考时积累一些句型，在考试的时候就直接的套进去，甚至有些考生无论是否适用都将它们套用进去，但是收到的效果往往并不如意想的那样。那么为什么为出现这种情况呢？小编认为为这种做法可能存在的缺点有二；

　　一是，一些套句很多考生都在使用，而考官看得太多之后，会认为某些过度依赖套句或模板的考生可能不具备独立写作的能力。特别是当很多同学文章里具体内容很少的时候，这些套句会显得格外扎眼，会导致考官给你比较低的分数。

　　二是，套句比较生硬，学生为了使用看似“高级”的套句扩充字数而生搬硬套，导致文不对题，可能直接会影响考生在任务回应（Address Task Efficiently）方面的成绩。

　　那么怎么减少对套句依赖呢？我们需要多想想前因后果。

　　第一，我们可以用原因状语从句，也就是since， because， as等连词引导的从句

　　例如： There is no denying that young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market.

　　这个句子用了There is no denying that 的套句，如果去掉后，我们可以用什么替代呢？

　　我们可以思考原因，为什么没接受高等教育的人很难在竞争激烈的工作市场中生存，可能是因为大多数公司喜欢雇佣高学历的人或者说高学历在社会上非常重要。

　　这句话我们可以改成：Young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market because the majority of companies tend to hire job applicants who hold bachelor degree or even master degree.

　　或者是：As academic qualification is highly valued in the modern society， young adults who do not receive tertiary education may find it difficult to survive in the increasingly competitive job market.

　　再举个栗子：It should also be noted that keeping regular exercise is of great important for young people.

　　这个句子用了It should also be noted that 的套句，如果去掉后，我们可以用什么替代呢？

　　我们可以思考原因，经常锻炼为什么对年轻人有好处呢？通过运动，我们可以变得更健康，并且有可能减少得肥胖症、糖尿病等疾病的可能；我们也通过一些体育...

　　不积跬步无以至千里，托福备考重在日常积累与练习，而各单项之间并不是孤立的，想要在托福写作中取得理想成绩，我们需要充分利用阅读进行让人眼前一亮的词句积累，和留学群小编一起来看看托福写作高分词句剖析与仿写。

　　原文材料

　　Although the obstacles to Pleistocene rewilding are substantial and the risks are not trivial， we can no longer accept a hands-off approach to wilderness preservation as realistic， defensible， or cost free.

　　尽管更新世野生动物复兴计划困难重重而且风险不小，我们再也不能认为不干预政策对于荒野保护来说是现实的、合情合理的、或者没有成本的！

　　推荐句式

　　Although the obstacles to A are substantial and the risks are not trivial， we can no longer accept a hands-off approach to A＇ as realistic， defensible， or cost free.

　　尽管 A 困难重重，风险也不小，但我们再也不能就 A 放任自流了，不能认为这种方法是现实的、合理的、或者是没有成本的！

　　这里面A＇换成A的另外一种说法就行了。操作起来非常简便。而且本句用起来也比较容易，尽管做A有风险，但我们还得做，因为不做的话后果可能更严重！

　　原创例句–1

　　Although the obstacles to environmental protection are substantial and the risks are not trivial， we can no longer accept a hands-off approach to environmental preservation as realistic， defensible， or cost free.

　　尽管环境保护困难重重而且风险不小，我们再也不能认为不干预政策对于环境保护来说是现实的、合情合理的、或者没有成本的！

　　原创例句–2

　　Although the obstacles to the cultivation of positive personality traits among children are substantial and the risks are not trivial， we can no longer accept a hands-off approach to children＇s mental health as realistic， defensible， or cost free.

　　尽管培养孩子的积极性格困难重重而且风险不小，我们再也不能认为不干预政策对于孩子的心理健康来说是现实的、合情合理的、或者没有成本的！

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　　托福写作我们完全可以通过在一篇文章里使用不同句型达成句式的多样化，下面我们就和留学群小编一起来看一看托福写作高分十大句型类别及实例解析。

　　1 否定句

　　1）Instead of indulging in playing computer games， children should be taught how to benefit from useful information on the internet.

　　应该教孩子们如何从互联网获取有益的信息，而不是沉溺于玩电脑游戏。

　　2）On no account （Under no circumstances） can we ignore the immense value of knowledge.

　　我们绝不能忽视知识的巨大价值。

　　3）College students take part-time jobs not for more money but for a better understanding of societies.

　　大学生参加兼职工作不是为了赚更多钱，而是为了更好地了解社会。

　　4）One＇s salary does not depend so much on his educational background as on his ability and contribution to the society.

　　一个人的工资与其说取决于他的教育背景倒不如说取决于他的能力和对社会的贡献。

　　5）In terms of nutrition， fast food is far from satisfactory.

　　从营养角度来说，快餐远非令人满意。

　　6）Parents would not expect their children to become useful persons without working hard.

　　父母们不能指望孩子们不经过刻苦努力就可以成才。

　　2 非限制性定语从句

　　1）Undoubtedly， practical courses can be used to the reality， which is of vital importance to their development in the future.

　　毫无疑问，实用性课程可以用于实际中，这对于他们未来发展是非常重要的。

　　2）Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media， which is sometimes dangerous and harmful.

　　孩子们倾向于模仿大众媒体上的所见所闻，这在有时是危险和有害的。

　　3）The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills， which may put them ...

　　托福写作不是一件简单的过程，留学群托福栏目小编整理了相关的资料，希望可以帮助考生度过考试的难关，下面是小编搜集的托福写作题目：孩子过度依赖电子产品的相关资讯，欢迎参考!

　　托福独立写作题目

　　Independent Task

　　Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.

　　托福写作模板及参考答案：

　　For parents, how to well plan their children’s development has been a huge problem. While some children are given more time on technological gadgets, others are more inclined to choose some activities, such as going camping or traveling. For me, the former option would be a better one.

　　Admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choice for children. Simpler toys, namely Lego, are a good way to develop children’s thinking on solving the problem through block by block. By assembling the pieces for different blocks, children could assemble an even big piece, such as the classic London Tower Bridge. Also, playing with friends is helpful. When they are playing with others, they would cooperate with them to playing sports or even solve problems. However, on balance, both of these ways are limited in helping children. Toys and outdoor activities are restrained to their actual forms: parents need lots of money to buy different toys to help children develop, and they pay a great amount of money on helping their childr...