托福写作例证

　　在托福写作中，“举例法”是较为常见的例证方法。举例可以让自己的文章更加充实饱满，也可以让自己的文章更加具备说服力。那么如何巧妙地将例子运用在文章里呢?留学群小编为大家带来托福作文举例法，以下是详细内容!大家可以参考一下!

　　“举例法”是较为常见的例证方法，它可以是由一个词、一个句子或者几个句子组成。譬如Modern homes often include the comforts of modern life, e.g. Air-conditioning and modern kitchens.

　　常用的举例方法有多例法和单例法。首先看多例法，写这个方面的前提是对于一个话题有很多话说。譬如讲农业科技的发展使得食物更加有营养。首先现代科技在种子培养的发展方面使得农作物产量更高，富含营养更丰富，而且市场上水果及农产品也更多样化了。其次，人们可以将农作物种在温室里，可以将植物种植在具有适宜营养物质的人造土壤里，而不需使用各种化学药品加速作物生长。同时，食品加工也更先进了，比如米的加工，一些工序可以快速去除其中的杂质，同时能有效地将关键营养物质保留。在写的时候注意用恰当的连词将例子连贯就好了。

　　另外一种便是单例法。一个较长的、完整的举例应该包括“三要素”——举例引导句、例子本身、例子的含义。其中，例子本身和例子的含义不能被省略。

　　譬如降到现在人们吃的食物更健康了因为每个人都更重视均衡饮食了。举一个熟知的人的例子。The food we have is more healthful than before because individuals attach greater importance to a balanced diet.摆明观点Take for example my grandmother who is 65 years old and enjoys her current late-life.引出例子To keep a good figure and a sound physical condition, she focuses on the daily nutrition taken from the food. At breakfast, she generallyhas soymilk, cereals, a boiled egg, and a small sum of noodlesto keep energetic in the morning. At noon, she will have some meat such as beef and chicken to gain necessary animal proteins. However, in the evening,she only has some piecesof boiled lettuce or broccoli to ease the burden of digestion. Plus,the greasy, salty and very spicy dishes would barely exist in her personalmenu. Actually, countless are people who have a similar dietary habit as my grandmother&...

　　审题，是写作的第一步，却经常被大家所忽略。有太多考生只着眼于如何写出漂亮的句子和高级的词汇，而没有搞清写作的本质--考察学生针对某一话题进行准确连贯表述的能力。这也是为什么很多同学虽然英语不弱，在托福考试的独立部分中却只能拿到fair或good当中较低的4分。那么，到底怎样才能更加容易地拿到独立写作的满分呢?留学群小编今天将通过列举以往考过的真题进行解析，告诉大家如何审题，换句话说，如何使高分变得更加achievable。

　　审题误区NO.1：忽略关键词

　　同学们考写作考了这么多年，大多数出题的形式都已烂熟于心，看到题目之后觉得熟悉于是兴冲冲提笔就写，其实，这种看似"熟练"的表象下藏着巨大的隐患--同学们很有可能因为看得太快而忽略某个决定题目意思的关键词。例如：

　　例1：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the only main cause for people's unhealthy eating habits.

　　看到这个题目，同学们立刻会开始想，有没有other reasons for unhealthy habits，想出三条如：1. People's tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours; 2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets"; 3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever. 综上所述，advertising is not the only cause.

　　这个写法看起来非常完备，但其实犯了一个不起眼却严重的错误--题目不是要我们证明it is not the only cause，而是要我们去证明it is not the only main cause。多一个"main"，意思是很不一样的。如果我们只需要证明it is not the only cause，那么找出other causes即可即例1中的写法。但是，如果我们要证明it is not the only main cause，就需要证明other causes that we mentioned are also main causes，这就需要在每一段中加上一些专门的说明。或者，更简单的办法是去证明advertising is not even a cause, 直接在每段的末尾加上advertising与该段所论述的unhealthy eating habit无关的论述即可。If it is not a cause, how can it be the onlymain cause? 这样一来，就不用通过证明还有其他main cause来反驳了，事实上，证明某种cause是main cause还是挺有难度的，因此笔者推荐同学们用后一种方式进行论...