留学群托福频道提供托福作文评分标准与托福作文真题下载,托福作文技巧与托福作文机经真经,剑桥托福作文等托福作文参考书推荐等托福作文培训与辅导。
新托福写作应该如何提高?作为一门国外类的考试的一部分,写作时候的用词表达就非常重要。恰当而富有特色的表达往往能够增加词汇的鲜活力。我们常常在看老外的文章时会发现,他们的一篇文章用,名词出现的概率相当的高。不仅如此,对名词喜爱的程度更是到了把动词都要名词化,而且经常性的使用抽象名词,因此在写作时,如果能够投其所好,自然能够得到加分。
简单说,名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的现象。比如动词转成名词:discovery->discovery, move->movement, refuse->refusal,又比如形容词转成名词:careless->carelessness, difficult->difficulty, intense->intensity.那么什么情况下,我们需要进行名词化呢?
A.谓语动词的宾语部分
原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.
名词化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.
B.结合被动形式
原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,…
名词化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,…
C.取代诸如从句中"the fact that"的用法
原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.
名词化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.
更好的名词化:a. When I denied his accusations, I impressed the jury.
b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.
D.名词化部分用在there is/are的后面
原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.
名词化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.
原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.
名词化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.
然而,有些时候,在我们的新托福写作方式中认为理所应当使用"名词化"时,老外认为是没有必要的。比如:
A. 名词化部分跟在动词后面
原句(名词化"冗余"):T...